Someone wrote in [personal profile] ileliberte 2011-01-23 10:20 pm (UTC)

CREEPY CONCRIT ANON IN DA HOUSE

This is reeeeaally pretty and you're obviously talented but I do think that Santana's face should have a little more delicate shape. Her chin is a little too strong to really look like Naya Rivera. She looks more like a male!Santana(Santanos? :D) than actual show!Santana, which might be what you're going for and in that case I'm sorry aahhaha. I really think that you nailed the upper part of her face(her eyes, her eyebrows etc) tho. And her expression is totally in character! :D

You could also have worked a little more on her clothes to make them more realistic. Mostly her pants cos her blazer looks nice :D. Her slacks should actually be kind of baggy but they look more like jodphurs except that Santanas legs should look skinnier if the slacks were tight so it just looks a little weird.

The soft way you shadowed her slacks also doesn't really mesh well with the really crisp shadowing of the blazer. I suggest that you stick with the blazer+skin!shadowing since it fits your style better and it looks much nicer. c:

Sorry for being a creepy creepy concrit!anon. It's like 11.17 pm in Sweden right now so this probably doesn't make much sense urgh sorryyyyy DDDDD:

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