This is reeeeeeally - no, I mean reeeeeeeeeeeeally good. *stares* Look how relaxed and happy they are! And John playing with Teyla's toes might just be the cutest thing ever. And his shirt's all rucked up! And this might be a really weird thing to point out, but I like the way that we can see the curve of Teyla's breast above the neckline of her shirt. Between the way her arm is resting up on the cushion and the way the snug-fitting top supports her breasts, we *should* see that, and we do, because you have a really amazing grasp of how to represent human anatomy, dude.

Nice work!